Violemeer
Deep in the dungeons of rajha, lived a dragon. The dragon has been trapped for centuries, locked in chains. All alone, left alone, without light, without air. The dragon whose name was violemeer, was the same as all dragons, except for one thing. Violemeer did not breathe fire, but instead had a very deadly invisible breath which would knock anyone close unconscious and left in a state of continuous daze. The wizard of rajha felt intimidated and jealous, since the dragon was becoming the main source for all victories for the kingdom, and decided to play an evil role.
The wizard went to the far and distant mountains of Def-rose, and waited and waited, till the dragon fell asleep. He then drugged him along with fellow dragons, jealous dragons, and took him to the dungeon. All of a sudden Violemeer woke up and found chains on the body. These chains were invisible also, made by the wizard himself, to hold down Violemeer forever.
The king and the people wondered about Violemeer, the rumor was that Violemeer had deserted them and went to the neighboring kingdom. However, the king did not believe that and decide to send his men to look. They looked, and looked but with no luck. The king died, his son died, his grandson died, and no one could find Violemeer. In the same time, the wizard became the source of all power, and controlled the whole kingdom. Closing its borders and making it a dark place to visit.
2000 years passed, and on one day, a stranger came into town. The stranger,was a tall young guy, with very sharp eyes. People who looked into his eyes, were amazed and could not move. There was something mystical in his eyes, but no one could figure it out. The stranger, went to the castle, entered, the wizard saw him and fell to his knees. The wizard knew who this stranger was, he knew.
Without saying a single word, the wizard, pointed to an arrow, the stranger pulled the arrow, to find a secret entrance to the dungeon. He went down, and saw the poor dragon, weak and fragile, chained. The stranger looked in the dragon eyes, and the dragon looked back, and then the chains broke, the wings flapped, the dragon could see, breath, move, Voilemeer was back!! full of life.
The stranger walked out of the dungeon with Voilemeer, passed the wizard, out of the gate. He climbed on top of Voilemeer, held Voilemeer wings firmly, and started to fly up into the sky, climbing up towards the clouds. As they ascended towards the horizon, the stranger rubbed Voilemeer neck, and watched the dragon turn color from dark rusty black to milky white. Voilemeer became an angelic dragon, like no other dragon before. The stranger smiled, and held firm as Voilemeer went up and down and from side to side in the wide blue sky.
They climbed upwards and upwards, until they reached a remote island in the middle of space. Voilemeer landed and the stranger stepped down. The stranger looked at Voilemeer and Voilemeer turned from a dragon into an angel. The stranger smiled again, and said..
"Voilemeer, now you are where you belong, where you will never hurt, where you will never be left alone. This is your home."
The stranger then merged with Voilemeer, and a new life form was created.
The wizard went to the far and distant mountains of Def-rose, and waited and waited, till the dragon fell asleep. He then drugged him along with fellow dragons, jealous dragons, and took him to the dungeon. All of a sudden Violemeer woke up and found chains on the body. These chains were invisible also, made by the wizard himself, to hold down Violemeer forever.
The king and the people wondered about Violemeer, the rumor was that Violemeer had deserted them and went to the neighboring kingdom. However, the king did not believe that and decide to send his men to look. They looked, and looked but with no luck. The king died, his son died, his grandson died, and no one could find Violemeer. In the same time, the wizard became the source of all power, and controlled the whole kingdom. Closing its borders and making it a dark place to visit.
2000 years passed, and on one day, a stranger came into town. The stranger,was a tall young guy, with very sharp eyes. People who looked into his eyes, were amazed and could not move. There was something mystical in his eyes, but no one could figure it out. The stranger, went to the castle, entered, the wizard saw him and fell to his knees. The wizard knew who this stranger was, he knew.
Without saying a single word, the wizard, pointed to an arrow, the stranger pulled the arrow, to find a secret entrance to the dungeon. He went down, and saw the poor dragon, weak and fragile, chained. The stranger looked in the dragon eyes, and the dragon looked back, and then the chains broke, the wings flapped, the dragon could see, breath, move, Voilemeer was back!! full of life.
The stranger walked out of the dungeon with Voilemeer, passed the wizard, out of the gate. He climbed on top of Voilemeer, held Voilemeer wings firmly, and started to fly up into the sky, climbing up towards the clouds. As they ascended towards the horizon, the stranger rubbed Voilemeer neck, and watched the dragon turn color from dark rusty black to milky white. Voilemeer became an angelic dragon, like no other dragon before. The stranger smiled, and held firm as Voilemeer went up and down and from side to side in the wide blue sky.
They climbed upwards and upwards, until they reached a remote island in the middle of space. Voilemeer landed and the stranger stepped down. The stranger looked at Voilemeer and Voilemeer turned from a dragon into an angel. The stranger smiled again, and said..
"Voilemeer, now you are where you belong, where you will never hurt, where you will never be left alone. This is your home."
The stranger then merged with Voilemeer, and a new life form was created.
posted by Purgatory at 3:21 PM
16 Comments:
WooooooooW! Nice story walla ... i really liked it, and i imagined everything in my mind. I think you hsould write more from time to time :)
nice story! bs ma fahamt shay ;/
Sooma,
Glad you liked it. I will see maybe there will be more stories in the future, but not sure when, I like to be diverse in my posts.
Maryam,
It does not have one meaning, you can read it and have your own understanding of the story. :)
Hehehe interesting story.. next time change the name of the dude.. I don't like weird names.. ;r they make me lose control or concentration
Never said the dragon was male or female, plus, this name is what makes the story special, its gothic. Otherwise, shsmeee, Payrouz ?
Nice story. Short and sweet. I never imagined you as being into dragons and such. :)
DG :) thanks, thought of doing something different for a change. A bit long for my taste, but goes smooth if you give it a chance.
Nice story, very touching, and well written, but could not relate to it, wana know why? Coz like all tell tales they all have happy endings, they told us stories of happy endings when we were kids. now its time to get real, wana be different I suggest u end it with a sad ending, a destructive ending, I need to feel reality, I'm suffocated, iny agrak agrak agrak…….
Rabab,
yes I know what you are saying, but this story was written with a different purpose :)
If my dark side surfaces again, you will get your wish.
I have suspicion that Violemeer is P4 in disguise.
shosho,
Nope, its not P4, he is with Z4 again.
Intresting story, I guess working in NL got into you :} maybee you miss it there & miss their stories. However very nice story i liked it alot, better than the dark mood posts for sure :D.
Q8CG, nothing to do with being in kuwait or NL, just a story I made up :)
nice story :) u are a talented writer ...
ma 3arafna who is the stranger???
ra-1 thanks for reading my posts again :)
As for the stranger, it can be whoever you want him to be. This story is not confined to a specific plot. The meaning of the story, the characters all can be seen from the eyes of the reader in the form he/she desires.
That is why it is written in a gothic, medieval, fantasy setting :)
hahahaha tata, interesting, I just made that word up, but seems you want to dig deep into the post, while there is not much in besides a normal story :)
Well if you want to be the stranger, why not :) you can decide what happened to the dragon, it is my story as much as it yours and anyone else, everyone sees something else.
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